23rd July, 2009. We have a very short period today as we continue our previous discussion. On 21st, July, we were required to think of the supporting detail for the thesis statement “ Jerry’s death signifies the birth of his pride and dignity.” Miss Dzeelfa wants us to write out our group supporting details on the white board and we discuss it after every group had written on the board. Mostly of my classmate think that Jerry’s death is meaningless, as I think that Jerry itself is meaningless. This is because he don’t appreciate his life. He tries to kill himself, but he lack of the courage to kill himself by piecing a knife into his heart to die immediately, instead of that, he plans to tell the zoo story and end up he make another innocent person- Peter to bear the pain and the guilt of killing him. He is selfish, silly and coward. He fails everything in life. I am quite look down upon him. After we have finish discussing the details of others group, Miss Dzeelfa tell us that this is how we should write an position paper and this activity really help us a lot in guarding us to write an position paper.
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